
Westward Women by Alice Martin
3/10/26; 304 pages
St. Martin's Press
Westward Women by Alice Martin is a so-so dystopian/alternate history/plague novel. This is Martin's literary debut.
An illness is spreading across the country that affects young women, 18-35 years-old. It begins with itching, followed by memory loss, and then an unstoppable compulsion to journey west. The novel follows three women Eve, Teenie, and Aimee. Eve is a reporter who thinks following the story will be her big break. She hears about a man called the Piper, who has a bus and assists women in their journey west. Aimee, who is searching for her infected best friend Ginny, has also heard of the Piper. Teenie is a infected woman heading west.
Honestly, I normally enjoy dystopian science fiction novels and was intrigued by the synopsis and premise of this one. Initially, Martin does get points for the quality of her writing. She manages to create a dream-like atmosphere while following her characters, But an atmospheric setting does not make up for the failings.
My problems with the novel started almost immediately. Take note: it is supposedly set in 1973. If you are setting a novel, even an alternate history novel during a specific time period you need to know how life worked then. At that time you would not be picking up phones making random phone calls, especially long distance calls at will. You would be looking for quarters to use at a phone booth, you would be dialing an operator to reverse charges. Any business would ask if the call was local before allowing you to use their phone. Cell phones did not exist then, yet Martin has her characters making phone calls without a second thought all the time. This was immediately very distracting and annoying.
The very slow pace of the novel did not help distract me to
overlook that overt error. Then, although the plot is told through the
point-of-view of her three main characters, they were really
interchangeable for much of the beginning of the novel. Initially, it
requires great concentration to tell them apart. Once the plot reaches
the halfway point, story lines were predictable. Finally, once the overt
messaging started it became repetitious while any actual, historical
connections to the time period were ignored. Thanks to St. Martin's Press for providing me with an
advance reader's copy via NetGalley. My review is voluntary and
expresses my honest opinion.




